Hello all, this is a piece of my novel Mistrealms, I have decided to put this up for a little feeback. A FAIR BIT OF REVENGE BY EDDIE GLOVER Tiala was bathing in a secluded lake deep in the forest around the great city of Olhsome when her destiny chose it's future path. Unknown to her a large man was watching, ogling the youthful female flesh before him. She rose from the waters and reached for her clothes when a large,hairy hand seized her around the waist. She screamed and turned right into the man's face which was hot with lust. She wanted to scream again but a muscular arm smashed into the side of her head, stunning her so that she couldn't fight. The man seized his advantage and shoved her to the ground beneath him. Her senses returned in a few minutes but by now she now she was bound at the wrists and gagged. She found that her legs were spread open by ropes which she could not break. The man entered her roughly, tearing her virgin tissue even as he beat her again and again. He finished and hit her brutally across the face. Tiala lay near death as the man got up off of her, leering down at her in a taunt. She managed to stay conscious as he got dressed, wearing the armor of one of the guards of Olhsome. She memorized his face, swearing to herself that someday she would make him pay. Suddenly a woman appeared before her, one of the gods that she'd often prayed to. 2 "My Goddess! Please spare my life and bless me with the power to avenge myself upon the man who has violated me!", she begged. The glowing woman frowned at her then spoke, "Daughter I grant you great powers, such power has only been bestowed by me once before. I will let you avenge your injustice but you must agree to serve me afterwards. Also you may not take life with my powers, this is the way of evil and to do so will make you a demon as it has many others.", she warned. "But I want him dead! He raped me!", she snarled. The goddess disappeared rather than continue an argument with her new servant. "Come back! I have to make him pay! You have to help me!", Tiala howled. Suddenly Tiala felt as if her body had caught fire, and the pain intensified until she passed out mercifully. She woke hours later thinking her encounter with the Goddess was merely a dream....until she looked at her body. Her wounds were all healed totally but this was not the part that stunned her. She was tall and powerful now as well as a woman of stunning beauty. The frail teen she'd been was gone, leaving her basking in power. Deep in her breast she felt the powers seething, barely contained by her untrained mind. There seemed to be no limit on her powers as they manifested. She made herself a man and sat in wonder at being the opposite gender. She flexed her male muscles and touched the new sex between her thighs. Tiala thought about remaining 3 a man , as one of them she would never have to fear their violations again. But as she saw her maleness memories flashed through her head of the rape and she changed back into a woman. The abilities fascinated her and she decided to work other changes on herself before pressing on. She told herself it was research but in fact she merely wanted to make herself believe in her new feeling of power. Tiala walked for hours before reaching a small cabin deep in the forest. She did not fear the prospect of a man answering the door, she'd convinced herself of her powers. A knock brought a filthy man to the door, a man smelling of blood and sweat. The man's eyes bulged at the sight of a gorgeous woman squeezed into clothes far too small for such a lush frame. "I need shelter for the night.", Tiala managed. Her confidence had disappeared before the man's lustful gaze. "Aye my dear!", the scamp laughed, "In my arms!". He tore her tunic to reveal her breasts even as she froze in shock. The rape flashed before her eyes even as the man ripped off her pants to leave her naked. The rough hands gripped her tight and Tiala was shaken to the point that her new powers reacted. Lightning leaped from her to destroy the man and she changed even as the ashes fell to the floor. 4 Her fingers became long claws that seemed like razors. Inch-long fangs drooled saliva as her twisted form hunched over the man's ashes. Tiala fought the blood lust that was changing her mind to match her evil shape, but it was a battle she was losing. The reflection she now cast was the image of creatures she had feared in her youth. Her skin was scaly and crimson and a long tail had grown from her backside. Her pointed ears suddenly caught the whimper of a girl from the deceased man's back room. She could smell the sweet blood flowing from the wounded victim and an evil smile widened as she imagined tearing streaks of crimson in smooth skin while feasting on...... "NO!!!!!", Tiala roared in defiance of her new nature. Her body instantly reverted to it's normal human form in that moment. She had survived the crime just barely, but if she killed again her new form would make the rapist seem desireable. Tiala weakly rose and entered the room to see a fifteen year-old girl tied to the bed naked, scared, and bleeding from the man's abuse. The new sorceress healed the girl, erasing all memory of her nightmare. She watched the girl go, wishing that she could forget as easily. Tiala sat on the bed and began rocking back and forth as the tears took over. It was days later when she left to journey to Olhsome, the only city for miles, and the home of the man she had determined to kill. She was uncaring of anything and had not even bothered 5 to eat for several days. The claw that nearly killed her was a blow that happened so fast that she was near death before she realized what had happened. The bear bent over her wounded form and prepared to slay until an arrow hit it in the chest. The beast howled in pain and snarled at the young man who had come to Tiala's aid. The lad was talented with his bow and yet the bear refused to fall even when five arrows were piercing it. Seeing that arrows could not kill the beast the lad leaped at it with his sword. Tiala was beginning to heal herself but her senses were not able to focus enough for another spell to work. The boy was as skilled with his sword as he'd been with the bow but lacked enough power to cut deep into the bear. Tiala watched their deadly dance in wonder. If the lad lived he might one day be a great warrior, but even now he was tiring. The beast smashed him down with a huge claw, a blow nothing human could survive. But even as the bear reached to tear his flesh it seemed to shrink until a cub mewled in wonder where an adult bear had been. Tiala knew that she had not been the one who worked that spell but her first concern was with the dying young man who had saved her life. A sound in the forest behind them made her grab the fallen lad's sword and whirl to attack. 6 Five women stood there naked and so gorgeous that even Tiala felt the attraction. "We were sent to help you.", the blonde in the lead said in a silky voice. "He needs your help far more than I, my powers are still weak from healing my own injuries. If you can I beg you to help!", she pleaded. The blonde frowned, "We can heal him but our proximity would cause changes in him that he could never accept.", she said sadly. Tiala was about to scream in anger and heal the lad herself, at the cost of her life if need be, when a red-haired beauty pulled her aside. "This is not something for a mortal to see.", was all she said. She turned and rejoined her companions without another word. Tiala awoke the next morning when the blonde shook her. "It is done. Do not be shocked by his new form. You must be the one to help him adjust. Already we have interfered too much, now we must leave you for a few moments.", the woman stated. The group of magical women walked back into the forest, leaving Tiala to wonder at her words. Tiala raced to the clearing where she had left the boy in these women's hands. She very nearly collapsed upon seeing the form lying on the spot the young man had been. It was a woman's form filling out the lad's bloodstained clothes! Tiala approached him.....her slowly, mesmerized by the total transformation. 7 The woman moaned and sat up on one elbow until she saw her large breasts bulging the front of the manly clothing. "Goddess!!!", she screamed as her hands confirmed the reality of the change. As a lad he had been only sixteen but the woman he now was seemed an adult of stunning beauty. Nearly hysterical with rage she tore her tunic to reveal the large breasts that her hands explored. Tiala grabbed the woman who was even larger in the chest than herself and shook her until the hysteria was abated. "Calm yourself!", she snapped, "You were as good as dead until a group of women appeared. They healed you but had to take your maleness to do so!". She hoped her words might sway the lad before he went insane. "Better to die a man than live as a whore!", the woman yelled at Tiala. "Where is the courage you showed while saving me from that bear? Is it gone because you now have breasts? If so then you might as well become the whore you think all women are!", she spat. "What life could I live? To get a husband and have children like all the other women in Olhsome?", she roared. "You need not be bound by anyone.", the blonde beauty that had saved the lad stood nude before them looking even more sensual than before. "There is much more to the world than 8 Olhsome and women are not child-bearing sex toys in all of them.", she finished. "You!!", the once-lad gasped, "The worshippers of the Dark One!". She seemed frightened of the woman now. "You were exiled decades ago, yet you seem young enough!". "You are accurate in your summation. I am one of those who once followed the Dark One. We were a violent, all-male group that desecrated the Goddess' temples while she clashed with our god. After her victory we were brought before her to answer for the crimes. She changed us into women as stunning as herself and cursed us so that we could never wear any clothing. Also we now carried a spell around us that turned any man near us into a woman like ourselves. Our allies found this out when we returned home. They drove us out after we had changed a dozen of them into women, fearing that eventually he would change them all. Since then we have become the stuff of legends used to frighten young men. We have repented our sins and now serve the Goddess, indeed it was she who asked us to help you.", the woman explained. Tiala looked at this beauty in wonder, amazed that she had been a male once. Her perfect breasts were far larger than Tiala's bosom. There was no trace of masculinity about the woman, but then again the youngster had no maleness remaining either. "What is your name?", the woman asked the once-lad. Swaying uneasily on her broadened hips the former lad spoke up, "My name was....is 9 Melson Hirlen. I heard about you from my father who said he had once encountered one of your women. The woman was gorgeous beyond compare he said, yet she fought them like a caged lioness. He was a straight arrow and objected when most of the men began to fondle her. Then he said that all the men staggered and changed before his eyes into women as beautiful as their prisoner. The nude blonde winked at him as if to say that she would not alter him, then she merely loped away. My father found his troop now all female but he was an equalist and helped them to sanctuary in Tas. He returned home saying that the others were all dead, sparing the new women the embarassment of their condition becoming known. And all the men of Olhsome know of the warrior who went into the forest to slay the witch- women only to return as a large-breasted lady. I even met her once, she seems to have adjusted in the years since.", Melson finished. "The hero....hah!", she snorted, "He was a rapist who we dealt with in our own way. I am glad to hear that she is happy however, there was no choice other than trnasformation.". Tiala was spellbound by the stories until she noticed that the lad's walk was becoming more feminine every minute as was his manerisms. She still did not know how to lable the woman, was Melson the he from before or the she that stood there now. "You seem to have calmed and adjusted to your new body!", Tiala grinned. "Not really.", Melson frowned, "But I see that there is a Goddess and it was her power 10 that remade me.". She carressed her abundant chest and smiled, "Who am I to argue with a deity. It already is beginning to feel natural, although I still feel like a man in the wrong flesh!", she grimaced. She began to swing her sword and stopped in puzzled amazement for the weapon seemed far lighter than it should be. She leaped and soared ten feet from a standing position without exerting herself. Her clothes were mere rags but she was vaulting about in joy at the power coursing through her female muscles. "I feel stronger, more agile!", she laughed. "Yes.", the woman smiled, "The magic fills your bones and muscles, this grants you speed, power, and agility far beyond that which you possessed as a boy. You wanted to be a warrior, now you have a woman's body that is far superior to any man's!". Melson went off to practice her fighting, leaving the other two women alone. "You carry the blood curse Tiala.", the blonde stated. "I......killed a man....it was my fault...I just didn't understand the powers I had been given, maybe I still don't.", she said sadly. "There are ways of revenge without bloodshed. I have touched your mind and given you the knowledge to avenge yourself without killing anyone.", she grinned. "You have another reason to continue to live, what of Melson? She is strong-willed but new to womanhood and will need someone to guide her through the next few months, and you are her only friend.". 11 The woman walked off as Tiala stared at her new companion. The volumptuos beauty named Melson was an enigma, beautiful woman on the outside but teen boy on the inside. The woman was right, Melson would need someone to teach her how to be a woman, and also a companion to keep the loneliness away. "Get on the horse Melson.", she said. The buxom woman turned at Tiala's words only to see a powerfully built mare. "Tiala?", she asked in wonder. The horse nodded in affirmation as the swordswoman leaped onto it's back. "We do make a strange pair, I'm a boy who became a swordswoman while you are a sorcerress!", Melson laughed. Melson felt her lush female body and laughed as her breasts bounced. "How am I supposed to get used to these!", she giggled. If Melson didn't know better she could have sworn that the horse laughed. General Brax Yelon leaned back in his chair listening to reports of wizards turning his troops into various forms. There was a great deal of anger amongst the men for these men were in danger of suffering the same fate as those who had been transformed. "What about Captain Vox? Did he report in from his sojourn into the forest?", the general mused. "Yes sir.", the aid shuffled some papers until finding the one he needed, "He reports no 12 activity except for one suspicious girl he datained.", the aid said while reading the report. "Detained!", the general snorted, "Why doesn't he just say raped! At least he worked out the anger that had been hanging about him lately.". "Is that all sir?", the aid said while trying to hide his disgust. "You are dismissed.", the general said. He called for one of his female servants and she quickly roused him, making him forget all that this day had brought. Tiala, now human again, was hiding in the bushes with Melson outside the castle that served as the headquarters for Olhsome's military. Tiala needed only a few moments before teleporting herself and Melson inside the great building. The swordswoman nearly screamed as they appeared inside the vast harem of the men. Dozens of young girls were weeping in pain and their bodies showed the signs of rape. "Those bastards!", Melson yelled, "I'll kill them all for this! They give men a bad name, no wonder Olhsome is such a pit with these degenerates around! I'm glad that I'm a woman now, else I'd have grown into one of them!", she spat. "I have a better idea than death.", Tiala smirked, "Give me a few minutes and the spell I need need will be ready." She went into a deep trance as her mind found all the denizens of the castle, over three hundred men in all. The few who were indeed innocent were warned to leave as she barely held back the power why those few escaped. 13 Melson was hiding in the shadows awaiting company when two guards came running in. Both were large, muscular warriors who couldn't react in time to stop the charge of a busty, blonde-haired woman. Melson gutted one immediately and decapitated the other with a backhand stroke. There was no crime in physical killing so she had no fear of bloodlust. She turned and stared at Tiala from whom a glowing energy was flying. The display of magic was awesome to Melson, never had she seen such a building of power. The spell leaped from Tiala like a living thing that enveloped every man in the castle. Their bodies were wracked with searing pain as flesh and bone changed so radically as to make them unrecognizable. "What did you do to them?", Melson asked as Tiala lepaed onto an abandoned horse in the stables. "Revenge is what I did.", she pointed to a figure staggering towards them. "Goddess help me!", a voice that seemed to be raising in pitch even as it spoke called. Melson watched the man move closer....or was it a man? The figure was growing more curved and rounded with each step......a if the person were changing. Finally the figure moved into the light, it was an extremely top-heavy woman with a face that was still male.....for a moment. Melson gaped as the change spread to the man's face, leaving a young woman's in it's place. Captain Arel Vox tore open his shirt without even noticing the two women before him. The 14 shirt parted to reveal two huge, perfect breasts with rosy nipples. He thrust a hand past now hairless thighs and met with the anatomy of a woman, not his accustomed manhood. The scream that tore from his altered throat was a high-pitched woman's. He collapsed to the ground in shock even as Tiala and Melson left laughing. Captain Vox was not alone in the change. Over three hundred men, all firm believers in Olhsome's male-dominant lifestyle, woke to find themselves now big breasted women with no trace of their old bodies intact.They milled about in confusion as to what would become of them in a society where women were seen as servants. Melson was laughing as they rode from the mass sex change, "A fair bit of revenge wouldn't you say!", she snorted in glee while trying to compose herself. Tiala remembered seeing her attacker stumble in half-female and broke into laughter with her partner. She had left the newly female rapist a gift as well, the memory of Tiala's rape would play through his/her mind, only he/she would play the female role in these new memories. The two women continued to laugh as they rode away, on the way to other adventures. ------ The discussion list for the Transformation Story Archive --------- The TSA is at: http://www.t0.or.at/~thomash/tsa for help write to: tsa-talk-request@t0.or.at all administrative questions to: thomash@t0.or.at WWW-List-Archive at: http://www.t0.or.at/cgi-bin/thomash-lwgate/tsa-talk